..umm yeah, horrible writing. There were parts in the book where I was un-sure if someone older than 12 had wrote it. I have no words about how bad this book was. Concept was a good one, but the plot was jumpy, at parts I felt like I was reading a 12 yr old's diary and while I get she was trying to show that she was the 'adult' in the relationship between her and her mom, it was poorly portrayed. I also had a hard time believing the relationship between her and Jax. I would have enjoyed more interaction and a better build up to their connection.